Wednesday 1 April 2009

FMP - Stay Focus - Script Development

Kiran's Script, edited and then expanded on by Haydn Robinson.

Scene 1

Location Ext: Day, Park/Street

Time-scale; 0.00-0.18 Minutes

Contents; Gareth and his mates are larking about, a lone girl approaches the group of lads and begins to flirt with Gareth, there is a clear connection between the two as Gareth makes no effort to refuse her.



Scene 2

Location Ext: Day, Park/Street

Time-scale; 0.19-0.30 Minutes

Contents; Gareth's girlfriend comes into frame in the background and notices her man to close for comfort with another girl. Gareth sees his girlfriend out the corner of his eye, he looks up, his face drop. Girlfriend looks at Gareth in disgust before turning to walk back where she came from, flirting girl reads between the lines, she isn't impressed, pushing Gareth she then makes a hasty exist from the scene. Gareth turns to his mates who are now in hysterics giving each other after just witnessing Gareth go from having two girls to none in a matter of seconds.



Scene 3

Location Int: Archway Studios & The Infinity Curve Studio

Time-scale; 0.31-0.55 Minutes

Contents; Gareth is isolated, all alone in the studio he is trying to write lyrics but with little success, Gareth is having trouble concentrating as his mind is on his ex. Cut with footage of Gareth and Speedo as they MC with dancers in the background, Filmed in front of the green screen in the photographic infinity curve studio.

Scene 4

Location Int: Girl's Bedroom

Time-scale; 0.31-0.55 Minutes

Contents; Gareth's ex girlfriend is sobbing reminiscing in her past with Gareth looking at photo's of the two where they were still happy together. She looks in the mirror wiping tears from her face, she looks lost in her thoughts as she walks of to the window.



Scene 5

Location Int: Gareth's Apartment

Time-scale; 0.55-1.22 Minutes

Contents; Gareth and his makes are drinking and laughing, on the surface things look fine, but it is clear from Gareth's body language that things aren't so good.



Scene 6

Location Ext: Evening, Street

Time-scale; 1.23-1.32 Minutes

Contents; Gareth's Ex and her mates are walking up the street, on the way to a club as they walk either side of the camera, the scene cuts to Gareth walking towards them, he goes to hand his Ex one of his CD's but she pushes past him, one of her mates grabs the CD and slighly puts it in the Ex's bag, as the other two mates walk past Gareth last they look at him flirtatiously.



Scene 7

Location Ext: Evening, Street

Time-scale; 1.33-1.36 Minutes

Contents; Gareth turns in time to see the girls walk around the corner, he stands in an isolated street to represent loneliness. Speedo, Gareth's mate observes all of this, he knows that things aren't right.



Scene 8

Location Int; Classroom or Infinity Curve Studio

Time-scale; 1.37-1.55 Minutes

Contents; Gareth at the front of the class teaching kids to MC. (I'm not so sure about this scene, as it seems of out of context with the rest of the script. I would personally replace this with MC-in' and dancers in front green screen or the infinity curve, to help the whole thing flow better.)



Scene 9

Location Int; Girl's Bedroom

Time-scale; 1.56-2.07 Minutes

Contents; Ex girlfriend finds the CD in her bag as she's getting ready to go out and puts it on. She soon realises it's Gareth and begins to cry.



Scene 10

Location Int; Club D-Fusion

Time-scale; 2.08-2.38 Minutes

Contents; Gareth and his crew are playing to a packed nightclub, Gareth's Ex girlfriend enters and sees him and the crew, she swallows her pride and dances over towards him. Gareth sees his ex coming his way as he tries to hide his smile, she get closer to him as they hold hands they look into each others eyes and smile.

Fin


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